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The charts below give information about the world's top three producers of four different dairy products in 2012.
【主体段分段】:
按照【类别】分段
- Body 1: milk,cheese
- Body 2:butter,milk powder
【开头段】
The bar chart compares the dairy production among the world’s top three producers for the year 2012.
【概述段】
It is clearthat in all the three regions, more milk was produced than other types of products. European Union wasthe primary producer ofmilk and cheese,whileIndia and Chinatook precedence inbutter and milk powder production respectively.
思路要点:
- 三个地区milk产量都最大
- Milk和Cheese→European Union最大,butter→India最大,milk powder→China最大
【Body 1】
In terms ofmilk output, EUtook the leadwith a substantial production of 142,970 metric tons, significantlysurpassingthe production in India by roughly 16,000 metric tons and that in US by around 50,000 metric tonnes.Likewise, EU stillmaintained its leading position incheese production(7,120 metric tons),whileBrazil only produced 700 metric tons of cheese .
思路要点:
- Milk:EU产量最大,显著超过India和US产量
- Cheese: EU产量最大(7,120 metric tons), 但Brazil产量只有700metric tons
【Body 2】
However, with an output of 4,500 metric tons, Indiadominatedbutter production, a figuremore than twice of the combined production inEU and US.A different pattern could be found inthe production of milk powder. Chinaranked the topin this item(1,200 metric tons),closely followed bythe figure in New Zealand(1,110 metric tons).The third largest producerwas EU, with 770 metric tons of milk powder produced in this area.
思路要点:
- Butter:India 最大,是EU和USA总和的两倍多
- Milk powder:China排第一,New Zealand第二,EU第三
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